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X Commandments

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I. There's a storm coming. I can't tell you when, or where, or even why, but I'll tell you this. Be prepared, because it's not me that's going to get hurt, it's you.

II. There's a storm on its way. Are you prepared? Are you going to stay here, or will you evacuate? Be warned, there's no where you can escape to.

III. There's a storm that's almost here. I told you, I warned you. You'd better be ready, because you will get no help. I know I'm certainly not going to be of aide to you.

IV. There's a storm. It's here.

V. You're going to die. I can't tell you when, or where, or even why, but I will tell you this. This is your chance.

VI. Most humans think they have transcended life. They have not. One cannot truly transcend life until they transcend death. Life is not something to take so lightly. So go die.

VII. Maybe you can transcend death. And life too.

VIII. Just remember. I am not Death. I am not God. I'm not Satan. I am not an Angel. I'm that voice in your head the you never listened to.

IX. I told you, warned you, begged you. You never listened.

X. So you'll feel better here.
something that came to mind in spanish...i dont know, i dont like the whole "im coming after you" element...i guess i just wanted it to end in a bang, not just "you'll feel better here"...ah well, nothing is perfect.

inspired by Bleach/ Ulquiorra.

this is your conscience talking by the way xD
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bart30000's avatar
whoha, deep ;)
I like it, some dark words but, I like it :D